Comments on: जो मुझे होता है वह दर्द तुझ तक पहुँचे

By: विनय

विनय — Mon, 04 May 2009 15:44:30 +0000

बहुत-बहुत शुक्रिया, आप मन से बहुत सच्चे लगे।

By: ishwar

ishwar — Mon, 04 May 2009 06:35:50 +0000

aapake rachanao mai jo DARD ki bhini-2 khushaboo aati hai wo kahi na kahi kai logo k jindagi se juda masala hai ,aur jis khubsoorati se aap us DARD ko kalam se panno mai ukerate hai ..usake liye aap dhanywaad k patra hai , yo to jindagi ka safar dard se bhara hai ,magar kuchh DARD jidagi se kuchh is tarah jud jaate hai us dard k bagar bhi ye safar bahut saooni si lagane lagati hai …,jab ki usase jindagi ka koi sarokar nahi ,fir bhi ye paapi man baar -jindagi ko unhi pagdandiyo ki or le chalane ko ukasaata hai ..aakhir esa kyo? aur kabhi-2 to ya yo kahiye khona /rona hi jindagi ka makshad lagate lagata hai ya fir yo kahe ki hame khone mai bhi jis aanand ki anubhooti hoti hai shaayad use paane mai bhi na ho,. aaj jindagi k 50 basant paar kar chukane k baad bhi jindagi vahi thahari hui hai jahaan hame kuchh khoya tha …kahane ko to apana/unaka ek sansaar basa hai aur magar fir bhi ek adhurapana/soonapan jindagi ko kuchh is tarah kachotati hai ki … us dard ka hissedaar kisi ko bana hi nahi paate…bas kabhi kabhar ek doosare ki kushalata ka samachaar le lete hai …sachchaai to yah hai ki poochhana kuchh aur chahate hai aur poochh kuchh aur jaate hai ……aakhir ye silsila kab tak chalata rahega ,……shaayad taumra ….. baharhaal aapaki sabhi rachanao ko maine pada …dil ko bada sakoon milata hai magar kabhi -2 ek dard ka bhi ahasaas kara jati hai …is liye aapaka sukriya …dard ka ahasaas karane k liye ……..kyo ki ye dard hi to kisi ki di hui amaanat hai jise hamane bade aramano se apani jindagi ka hissa bana liya hai …….MA SARASWATI AAPAKI LEKHANI KO AUR BHI SHAKTI PRADAAN KARE , taaki aap apane dil mai uthe jwarbhatao se motiyo ko chun kar …unhai shabdo mai piro kar ham tak pahucha kake …iti …aapaka shubhbhechchh …ISHWAR

By: विनय

विनय — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 19:22:02 +0000

thanks ms ji, perhaps you’re talking about your past life.

By: MS

MS — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 17:29:32 +0000

It is beautiful…..reflects my emotions perfectly…!

By: Digamber Naswa

Digamber Naswa — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 14:31:25 +0000

की है इस दिल ने सदा तुझसे मोहब्बत
सादा-सादा इक यह फ़र्द तुझ तक पहुँचे

सभी शेर इतने खूबसूरत हैं की बार बार पढने को जी करता है, पर मुझे ये ख़ास लगा

By: विनय

विनय — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 12:57:57 +0000

राज, बवाल और अमित जी आपका स्नेह बना रहे, धन्यवाद!

By: Amit

Amit — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 04:27:50 +0000

काफ़ी अच्छा लिखा है आपने